Writing. What do you think?

Okay. I write stories sometimes but most of them never get past the first chapter (if even that). So here is part of a "story" I am writing.

Have you ever considered death? I have. So many, many times, although it seems irrational with how normal I seem. But this is only a recent occurrence. Just as my living with normal people is. But now I must. I must live with normal people like it’s nothing new to me. Like I know how to act and how not act, how to understand people and not misinterpret their behavior. But most of all, know how not to reveal myself or my secrets to anyone. Rain is no more. Elizabeth Allison is in her place and will forever be from this point forward, always trying to escape the past that was another life.


So tell me what you think. Personally I am not going to say it's great but at least it's better than some teenagers my age... at least from what my teachers say 'bout my writing. *sigh* But, anyhoo, what's your opinion?




And BTW- This isn't a suicide story. It's actually good.

Brittany B.